It was the fourth day since he
had been down there. He didn't know where he was or what was going on. He
received food and water once a day but he never saw who brought it. His 'cell'
was cleaned by morning and he never saw who did that too. He wasn't being
maltreated or mishandled, just tied up and connected to a tube. The tube
supplied him with oxygen directly to his lungs because the room was completely
devoid of air. Oxygen was allowed in only when he was ready to eat. Once he was
done, the oxygen would be sucked out of the room until he passed out. By the
time he woke up the tube would be back in his nostrils.
Once a day he was made to pass
out by means of the tube. By the time he comes to, he'd be in the washroom. A
sign was there directing him to take his bath and use the 'loo'. There were
cameras everywhere keeping a close eye on him.
Being as smart as he was he
started counting the seconds by using his heart-rate as his timer. It was also
the only activity that was keeping him focused. He knew that by the time he
woke up from sleep he had 1,250 heartbeats before he passed out. He had 350
heartbeats to use the wash up before he passed out again. In that period his
food and drink would be provided.
He had also used his sleeping
times as a way of counting the days since he found himself in that peculiar
situation. On this fourth day something was off, very off. He counted 2,200
heartbeats before his meal came in. This change in routine started to mess with
his focus and his instincts started firing like crazy.
He started to work out possible
escape scenarios but none of them seemed feasible since he didn't even know how
he got there in the first place. There was nothing he could grab and since the
cameras were always on, 4 in each room viewing all 4 angles of the whichever
room he was in, he couldn't sneak anything into his outfit.
Also for some funny reason, more
oxygen was being pumped through the tube as if his captor was trying to keep
him awake. it was working, no matter how hard he tried he just couldn't call on
the sandman to come sprinkle some fairy dust on his eyelids. He then started counting
his heartbeat just to keep him focused but that wasn't working. His mind wouldn't
let him.
He tried counting again but the oxygen
wasn't helping. Focusing with all his will power he managed to get to 600 irregular
heartbeats before then next strange thing happened. The oxygen began to lessen.
At first it was relieving, until he realized that whoever was controlling it was
about putting him to sleep, again.
As he was passing out, he heard a
noise, like a door opening, at a corner of the room you'd least expect a door to
be. A man walked in and in the dying moments of his passing out he heard;
"Time to put you back Mr. Charles
Takyi. Or should I call you Tek?" That was it, he was out cold.
Lots of suspense! Keep it up Yaw.
ReplyDelete:) yay, i guess the idea wasn't bad then. Thanks Tiff:) yay, i guess the idea wasn't bad then. Thanks Tiff
ReplyDeletehmmmmmm i must say i like the way the story is being told. makes me feel as tho am reading a sidney sheldon book. Keep it up
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